Here you go., A story, read it if you want.

Thank you. I'll add the link to myspace too.

I better re-read the fan fic.

Well, I promised I'd keep posting these.
So, just like the title of the thread says, here you go.



Chapter 8: Changes

The three of us looked toward the destroyed door, attempting to discover who our newcomer was. Whatever was forcing its way through had used a much more powerful method than before. Smoke and debris still piled around the entrance, our view was blocked for the moment. Draken's body shifted, I turned my gaze to find he was quickly sizing up Karin and I. He intended to kill at least one of us before being attacked by what could be an ally of ours. As fast as I could I did the same, checking out my own condition. Through all this fighting, I was surprised to see just how much of a mess I really was. It appeared every single bit of my armor was covered in blood. The wound from his attack on my chest was absolutely vile. It connected from the center of my torso over to my left shoulder. I attempted to wiggle my left fingers only to find they would barely move. That arm was useless, but it wasn't my sword arm at least. I stood on two feet, but if he assaulted me now I would only be able to defend myself a few moments before being killed. Karin however, looked much better. Her burns were showing to be very bad, and blood seeped out of certain parts of her armor. She wasn't as strong as me though, not nearly as strong. I was sure she had internal injuries and her body would not have recovered to anywhere near the point I had while fighting. That and the fact she had not and surely could not form her spear, meant she would be struck down in an instant.
I didn't know which of us he would go for, but I knew he wasn't going to waste any time. He finally made the slightest hint to his decision, he was about to rush his target. Then, something odd happened. I was moving, I was staggering forward and I did not know how. My body was moving itself towards him. Every step forward was a surprise, it simply felt like it was moving itself. I was angry. I was sick of hearing him gloat, seeing how powerful he was. I was sick and tired of him being alive. I was also a fool. My limp body stumbled into him, my arm barely raising to strike. I didn't know what I was doing, but he did. My body had already lost so much blood it really couldn't feel pain anymore, but I felt his sword run through me nonetheless. It jabbed into my belly and slung up out of the same already injured shoulder, almost severing my neck. It was over, I walked up and let him deal the fatal blow. My body slumped to the ground, my face hit the stone and I stared into nothing. Someone called out my name, it was female, probably Karin. Why the hell did I do that, I threw my life away after working so hard to find a meaning for it. I was supposed to kill this man, that's what I was doing all of this for. Why did I let him kill me, when I knew he was going to go for Karin first.
"Mathias.... no!"
Of course, that's why I did it. I knew he was going for Karin. I threw myself into him so that I would be killed instead of her. How could I have been so stupid, how could I have done something so irrational? Karin is far too weak to take on Draken, I was the only one that ever stood a chance. I should have let her die and take the time to try and recover more. I needed to think of a way to counter him. There was talking around me, a man had entered the room.
".......you...........dead?" I could barely even hear what was going on.
I didn't recognize the voice. He asked if I was dead. I'm pretty sure I am dead. I can't even close my eyes, I'm soaking in my own blood. There were noises going on around me now, it seemed fighting was going on. There was more talking between the three of them, nothing I could understand. I felt alone at the moment.
"Angel, are you there?" I asked, not knowing if I was thinking or talking aloud.
There was no response. The fighting around me continued.
"Am I dead?" I searched for him again. He made me feel better. "I want to talk to you."
Still nothing, he had left me. My mind trailed off to other things. I remembered when I was younger, the first time I invited Blaine to my household. I remembered the dinner he had with my family. I couldn't remember being there though. I remembered it, but it felt like someone else was there instead of me. Blaine and I were such good friends back then. I had a lot of people that said they were my friends, but I knew it was a lie. Racism against Hikens was bad in Montegale, and most people in the city were only nice to me because of the status of my family. Blaine was the only one that didn't care that I was different, he was the only one I really trusted. There was talking again, and something touched my back. A warm sensation flowed through me. Suddenly I was breathing, I hadn't noticed that I had stopped for some time now. The sounds around me were getting louder and clear again. The new voice spoke, this time it seemed more familiar.
"I was able to give you some energy and partially seal your wounds." It said, "My healing isn't very potent though, and you've lost a lot of blood, so try not to move too much."
I began to rise, and immediately fell flat after getting up a few inches.
"He's such an idiot, all he ever does is what he wants to do." This was Karin's voice, she was closer.
"Stay with him, we can't let him get killed now." The newcomer responded.
There were footsteps and talking again, I didn't catch what was being said this time, but I could tell it was dialog between the newcomer and Draken. Someone had their hands on me, they were turning my body over. My head spun to eventually face the ceiling, and to see Karin staring down on me.
"How do you feel?" She asked.
"I hate you." I answered.
My head was laying in her lap. I wasn't happy with this and tried to get up. A few inches again though, and my body failed me. Karin grunted in dismay.
"Stop trying to move. You almost died just now but if you keep that up you're going to reopen your wounds."
I laughed weakly. "I've almost been killed quite a few times this evening." I said back, "At this point I'm ready to die anyways."
She didn't respond, so instead I tried to scan the room for the other two. I was propped up slightly and eventually able to catch eye of Draken staring down the newcomer. He stood with his back to us. He was huge, almost 7 feet tall, broad shoulders and long black hair. Gray armor and pants and almost completely white skin covering his large arms. All these features weren't really important though, I could tell who he was by the massive sword in his right hand. It was Rave the Champion. He's the most powerful human being alive. I had hoped for an ally, and there's no better ally to have than him.
"I can see that the blood from your wounds have a tendency to slither to your sword." He spoke to Draken. "I take it you're so called vampire that's been killing innocent people all these years."
"Yeah." He replied. "That's me."
They stood silently, not unlike the way Draken and I did before we fought. Rave shifted his weight to the side, I could see his face. It was serious and solemn as always, his red eyes shimmering like they always do. He seemed bothered, thinking of something.
"Well." He finally said, "I'm going to have to kill you now, are you ready?"
Draken grinned, he always formed that sick and twisted grin. I knew he was powerful, but he likely was being over confident. He must not know just how strong Rave really is.
"Boy, you don't have anywhere near what it takes to kill me." He hissed through his teeth. "You may think you have a right to be cocky, but you have no idea just how strong I really am."

Ok. I finally uploaded Chapter 1, Now it should be easier to update and quicker.

I don't know what skin you like the most... so...
Mercury Skin - Jupiter Skin - Luna Skin - Mars Skin - Venus Skin

I checked it out, everything looked great except one thing.

The title of my stort isn't "Here You Go".

I can't believe you put that, but I guess it's my fault too because I didn't specify.

Anyways, it doesn't really have a real title, but if you could please change it.

Call it "Finale" for that chapter and the ones after pretty please, sorry about the trouble.

Ok. I'll edit it tomorrow or after tomorrow. Anyways didn't I send you a pm asking the title?
Edit: I checked... and I forgot... T_T

Revive.


I actually have crap I can update this with, though I'm happy to saw I don't have all my... what was the term...


Eggs in one basket?